There is this, an interesting aspect of these poems, they break from the traditional lines making and conventional punctuation which make them unique. Liberty in poetry is fine as long as it is done well. Who knows what she or he is doing can break the rules. You've done well here going away from the normal or the standard of verse-making.
One has to admire experimentation in poetry when it comes across as poetic, and this is certainty that.
There is this, an interesting aspect of these poems, they break from the traditional lines making and conventional punctuation which make them unique. Liberty in poetry is fine as long as it is done well. Who knows what she or he is doing can break the rules. You've done well here going away from the normal or the standard of verse-making.
One has to admire experimentation in poetry when it comes across as poetic, and this is certainty that.