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The language in this poems strike with simplicity. My inner thoughts longing to birth something as simple and resonating as this. Something that is not impressed with dead metaphors and hyperbolic similes. Something that sees life and growth in everything.

I really must say to Mrs. Shelly, I am thrilled and torn in the gasp of beauty of your words

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In this poem that language strikes as a bit of science fiction, but under it there is poetic language. It does not read like prose statements.

A poem that one can comprehend with a touch of entertaining diction. You did well here.

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Thank you, Luis!

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